He walked inside the factory, suddenly everything was dark. He felt frightened. when the lights turned on, he realised that robots were everywhere, playing, swimming, cooking, fighting, and studying. He felt like something big was going to happen. His heart was pounding. He ran and saw somebody that looked like him. They turned,"MOM, DAD, SISTER!!!"He was happy that he could explode. He huge them.most of all he could talk
nice work and good punctuation. $o$
# speechless very god ganes
I really like the way that you think about it,you didn't start the story from the beginning and you didn't continue from the end you started around the middle and I like it.
And I like how you said that he saw his family and that he *huged them.
#amazing story =]
I like your name.
Ilike your name ganes good jod
He walked into the building,scared and frightened.suddenly a fork lifter comes out of nowhere, luckily he dodged it he opened his eyes and found other robots, then one of the robots started to gesture to him it looked frightened...BAM!!Something hit him... he woke up in a cage then someone picked him up and broke him and he died.
As Jeff walked away from the factory he bumped into a female robot and they fell into instant love. A few days passed and then one unfortunate evenings a rouge cat tore the both of then to pieces, but they took the journey to heaven together and their parts still remain in that very forest.
I liked how you used Jeff as your main character
: Jeff walked away from the factory and JHON CENA!!!
I liked it but I didn't like the romance.
The robot found his family and they walked back to the forest but then they had to fight the robot zombie Apocalypse!!!.but then they get crushed by a train.And the robot zombies invaded the world hahahahahahahahah.
I liked how you talked about zombies
Well I guess it is pretty good. >-<
Awkward and good but I don't like zombies they're too old.
After the robot found the leaf he was walking between the train trails.
He was frightened that he would be treated unwell again,suddenly he realised that he was walking where the train was and that a train was coming towards him.
The darkness was apon him,the fear that he would be crushed and broken.
When the train was about to hit him he lay down just when the train nearly hit him.
His robot parts was broken and damadged,it had almost been like he went through an explosion.He was even rustier and dirtier than before,struggling to get up.
Just when he knew that this was the end a human came up to him it was a little seven year old girl.
She was devastated when she saw that the robot was hurt.
She helped him up and carried him like as if he was a baby and she took him home.
And from the day on he was treated with fairness,love and careness.
After finding the factory, the robot discovered there was another robot! They then met and became best friends! They made a tree-house and then survive together and do everything together! They are soon separated from each other and then they both must fight against all odds to see each other again. After a year they are both crushed by a random crane. :/
The robot got out of the train and what he saw was robot with the same logo as him.so he thought that he belong there he made friends.He turned into a new robot and he was not a lonely robot any more.
He was looking at his new enviroment. Machines pumping oil , melting metal the smell of old tires burned his nose suffocating him, he couldn't breath any more. The cleaner robot thought that he was scrape metal and threw him into a pool of metal. Your father was a brave man he did survive the pool of metal but only to suffer more the walls around him started to close in slowly crushing him , living his last minutes he sent me a letter about how much he loved me and how sorry he was about leaving me behind to find out where he was made and he told me that he was never ever going to see me again.
I like the end of year u story
He walked to the forest. He looked sad he fell scared about something then he found smoke from the train. Then he walked walked walked and walked but it nothing happen. He saw a leaf it was orange and he picked up the leaf put on his hand he look at the leaf. Then he walked walked and walked so he saw a girl is was coming to him, that is love at first site for him. After that he was happy 🤓🤓🤓
Dat good. XD
The robot got out of the train what he saw was robot that he the same logo as him.So he thing that he belong there he made a lone of friend.and he not a lonely robot any more.
Brandon was walking on the road, holding and playing with the leaves. But then, he didn't know his own name. But, one thing, he found a dog and also felt lonely the same like his situations. They were friends and played together, they did not felt bored and lonely anymore. So, from there, they. Always play together.
The lonely robot saw a bright light shining on the side of his face and saw nice trees and rainfalls and thought this place is nice because the place he lived in was not as good as the place he lived in. He walked on the train tracks to where the light was coming from. He finally got there. He looked around,smiled when suddenly SMASH!! He got hit by a train and died.
Bobby was walking on the road,holding the leave.'Who am I?'Bobby thought.Goo--Bobby look at his tummy,he was hungry now.He lay down on the road,'What I going to eat?'He looked at the leave in his hand. 'Can I eat this?' Bobby put the leave in his mouth , yack! Bobby yelled. I am going to found some real food. Bobby said. Bobby walked down the road. He was so tired, he lay down on the again, fell asleep. Hoo-hoo!. Bobby was awake, is raining. Help! Bobby yelled. Get up! Bobby. Time for school! Mum and yelled. Ah! Is just a dream!
The robot found a door but is was opened.He thought it would be a bad idea but he also thought It would be a great idea to.There could be a family over there to stay with him.Then he started to walk but suddenly he stopped.He said in his head "why do I need a family" "BOOM" the door started to close he had a choice one to see if his family is in there tow go on with his life.He started to run as fast as he can he was in the door was closed and it was pitch black and he didn't know what to do. He heard a voice "who are you what is your name" the voice said the robot said nothing.Then a nother one said the same thing and a bother one until it was like a city then the lights was on it was a city but with no people only robots. 🤖🤖
"Where am I?
Skreech! Huh, what was that?
Scattering through the brightly coloured leaves ,I rushed towards the black smoke filling the air.
Hey that has the same print as i did maybe it will take me to my parents , i need to get on that,that! "HUFF,HUFF" jump, "whew i made it" "LOW POWER MODE ON" oh i better save my energy, shutting downnnnn...
I gasped to breathe " where is this ?" I look around the large room and I saw a dim light coming from down the hall . I call out " mother father is that you?" " VROOM " "AHHHHHH!... Sniffle, sob" I'm not going to be a machine like that! I'm going to find my real home!
Little Billy-bot scanned the room and picked up a maple leaf that was almost as big as himself .
That is how billy-bot's journy to find hi home began.
One day, a robot playing with some leaves, then he saw a train was coming, and the train had a picture, he looked at the picture, and look at himself, then he was very happy, because he has that picture too! And he thought: Oh! That train was my home! It's must be! Then the robot got on the train. He was very tired now, he need slept, so he slept, slept, slept......Was morning now, robot get up and he want go out to see something, and he found a woman robot, he love she and she love he, so they are very happy!
The train stopped!! Suddenly it was dark,I stepped out of the train wondering where I was.Then I realised there was a sign that was the same thing I had on me.I walked and walked until there was a BANG!!
I woke up my legs were sore,my arms where weak and my head was twisting and turning.I looked around I was in a room and a lot of robots came over to where I was,they brought something very unusual.It had every colour in it.Then they put it in me.
After that I felt much better.Every thing was back to normal.Then I had to say good- bye