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Creative Writing Week 5 T2

23/5/2016

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TheKDestroyer (Kamran)
27/5/2016 10:56:01 am

The doorbell rings. I see who is ringing the doorbell. Wait, what is this? Packed Human!? MUM! We got another one! This is bad, Someone is murdering kids, and putting them in packages and sending it to us? Something is wrong, because these packed "humans" are turning green, like a zombie colour. And the worst thing was, they actually moved in the packages. But how? Dead bodies usually rot and turn in to skeletons. But we have had one for over 3 months, and it has the most green out of all of them. Wait a second, what's that sound?! Something is saying brains, and I hear footsteps! :O OH NO! IT WAS REALLY A ZOMBIE! RUN! RUN FOR YOUR LI- ...

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Kelly
29/5/2016 10:44:37 pm

oooh TheKDestroyer I think I can smell it. Fabulous descriptions, I'm starting to feel sick! and I can't wait to find out who rang the doorbell ...

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GamerKitty
29/5/2016 07:56:06 am

One day, a butterfly met a flower
“ Good day, stranger” the flower said
“ what brings you here?”
“Me I’m just a passing traveller.” the butterfly replied.
“You look worn out. Why don’t you take a rest?”
“ many thanks”
The flower offered the butterfly some nectar, and the two parted as friends.

From then on the butterfly would visit the flower everyday. Those days were filled with unexpected happiness of new found friendship.
“ I’ll be leaving soon, it’s the time of year i start travelling again, i wish you could see me and my family migrating it’s really a sight to behold.” the butterfly said
“Is that so? I hope you enjoy your trip.”
One day the butterfly returned to bid farewell to his friend, but the flower was no longer there. Autumn came, and the butterfly parted for the warmer climes. The rose bush wilted quietly in winter. Soon enough, spring returned, and the world was born anew.

Summer came… One day the butterfly passed by and saw a familiar looking-flower
“Good day stranger what brings you here”
And the butterfly smiled and once again said
“Me? I’m just a passing traveller.”

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¯\_❍ᗝ❍_/¯
30/5/2016 09:35:02 am

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I don't know why i am rowt this but i would not stop writing it. What i am writing is a book 101-dumb ways to dey. Sher it wasn't the best at launch well his is.

It wa ritand by <some random person> shor they had real name i just can’t remember their name at publishing know one wanted to publish it so it <some random person> published himself it must have been a lot of fun publishing by himself

So about a month had past it went quite well it even became a hit with over a milgin in sals
It was amazing moves spinoffs sequels and prequels tv shows and more

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WS
30/5/2016 10:28:45 am

My dad birthday gift

Tomorrow, is dad’s birthday. I was planning to buy him a T-shirt that he wanted from his last month, with his favorite colour and I was planning to buy the T-shirt tomorrow straight away, after school.

Tomorrow, after school I ran to the T-shirt store. without thinking anything, I bought him the T-shirt. I was so excited that I will give him a birthday gift for the first time.

I was going home by bus, about to arrive. I ran to my house after I arrived my house I noticed that I left the T-shirt in the bus!!!! I was so sad T-T

But I don’t know what to do. I think I want to buy a new T-shirt for my dad cause I have more money and the T-shirt does not expensive. When I was in the way to the new T-shirt store. There’s someone who stand near me

After I arrived the T-shirt store. At the cashier, I just realised that I lost my money thats meant I can’t bought the new T-shirt for my dad.

Now, i know i would always be careful.






My dad birthday gift

Tomorrow, is dad’s birthday. I was planning to buy him a T-shirt that he wanted from his last month, with his favorite colour and I was planning to buy the T-shirt tomorrow straight away, after school.

Tomorrow, after school I ran to the T-shirt store. without thinking anything, I bought him the T-shirt. I was so excited that I will give him a birthday gift for the first time.

I was going home by bus, about to arrive. I ran to my house after I arrived my house I noticed that I left the T-shirt in the bus!!!! I was so sad T-T

But I don’t know what to do. I think I want to buy a new T-shirt for my dad cause I have more money and the T-shirt does not expensive. When I was in the way to the new T-shirt store. There’s someone who stand near me

After I arrived the T-shirt store. At the cashier, I just realised that I lost my money thats meant I can’t bought the new T-shirt for my dad.

Now, i know i would always be careful.




Tomorrow, is dad’s birthday. I was planning to buy him a T-shirt that he wanted from his last month, with his favorite colour and I was planning to buy the T-shirt tomorrow straight away, after school.

Tomorrow, after school I ran to the T-shirt store. without thinking anything, I bought him the T-shirt. I was so excited that I will give him a birthday gift for the first time.

I was going home by bus, about to arrive. I ran to my house after I arrived my house I noticed that I left the T-shirt in the bus!!!! I was so sad T-T

But I don’t know what to do. I think I want to buy a new T-shirt for my dad cause I have more money and the T-shirt does not expensive. When I was in the way to the new T-shirt store. There’s someone who stand near me

After I arrived the T-shirt store. At the cashier, I just realised that I lost my money thats meant I can’t bought the new T-shirt for my dad.

Now, i know i would always be careful.











Tomorrow, is dad’s birthday. I was planning to buy him a T-shirt that he wanted from his last month, with his favorite colour and I was planning to buy the T-shirt tomorrow straight away, after school.

Tomorrow, after school I ran to the T-shirt store. without thinking anything, I bought him the T-shirt. I was so excited that I will give him a birthday gift for the first time.

I was going home by bus, about to arrive. I ran to my house after I arrived my house I noticed that I left the T-shirt in the bus!!!! I was so sad T-T

But I don’t know what to do. I think I want to buy a new T-shirt for my dad cause I have more money and the T-shirt does not expensive. When I was in the way to the new T-shirt store. There’s someone who stand near me

After I arrived the T-shirt store. At the cashier, I just realised that I lost my money thats meant I can’t bought the new T-shirt for my dad.

Now, i know i would always be careful.











Tomorrow, is dad’s birthday. I was planning to buy him a T-shirt that he wanted from his last month, with his favorite colour and I was planning to buy the T-shirt tomorrow straight away, after school.

Tomorrow, after school I ran to the T-shirt store. without thinking anything, I bought him the T-shirt. I was so excited that I will give him a birthday gift for the first time.

I was going home by bus, about to arrive. I ran to my house after I arrived my house I noticed that I left the T-shirt in the bus!!!! I was so sad T-T

But I don’t know what to do. I think I want to buy a new T-shirt for my dad cause I have more money and the T-shirt does not expensive. When I was in the way to the new T-shirt store. There’s someone who stand near me

After I arrived the T-shirt store. At the cashier, I just realised that I lost my money thats meant I can’t bought the new T-shirt for my dad.

Now, i know i would always be careful.











Tomorrow, is dad’s birthday. I was planning to buy him a T-shirt that he wanted from his last month,

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N
30/5/2016 10:28:47 am

It was mum’s 36th birthday. My sister and I decided to put our pocket money together to buy her a beautiful ring to show her how we appreciated her. I was in charge of buying the ring.

After school I raced to go to the jewellery store. The jeweller asked me to leave my bag outside as the shop was crowded. I purchased a white silver ring with a blue stone. I glanced at my watch and realised I needed to hurry or I would miss the bus. I threw the blue and white box with the ring in it into my bag, pick it up and ran.

When my sister got home I opened my bag to show off the ring. I was horrified to realise that it was not my bag. I grabbed the wrong bag, which meant someone else had the ring. I felt sick.

We all raced to the shop. There were no bags there and the shop was closed. I burst into tears just as a girl from my school rounded a corner she held out a bag.

But, who knows if that’s not my bag. I raced to home quickly and check whether that is my bag and the ring still inside or not.
“That’s not my bag” I shouted. So, that’s meant I still don’t have the ring yet.

I have to keep going to find the ring because next 2 days is mom birthday. Tomorrow, morning is Sunday. I keep find, find and find. But, there’s NO !!

At last, I have to bought another ring using me and my sister pocket money again to show that we appreciated her. I arrived the jewellery store and bought a white silver ring. I hold tightly so that I don’t lost it again.

I was so relieved. I vowed I would always take more care with precious objects.

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Messigicain
30/5/2016 10:50:18 am

It was Halloween, little kids running around as usual. But this is a different one. My doorbell rang I marched to answer to the door. What i saw was a baby on a tray wrapped by a plastic cover. I yelled inside “ we got another one!”. I lifted it to the kitchen. “ what do we do with it?” I asked my mom.
“Same as the others.” She said. I unwrapped it and lifted to the guest room to let the fifties, yes I mean fifties baby rest! Tonight at nine the doorbell rang again. My dad stomped down to answer it. “ Don't…” Before my dad could finish he was shocked
I ran down worriedly to see what was going on. What I saw was Jesus! Me and my dad was speechless. Next to the lord of lords was an angel. “I came for you!” He spoked. My pop pointed at himself surprisingly. Suddenly the Angel started to whisper something to Jesus. Was something wrong with my dad? Is he going to die? Will he go to heaven or hell? Wrong.
“ holy macaroni” cried the good shepherd as he pointed at me “ I mean I came for you!” I pointed at myself.
In nothing flat I disappeared somewhere that is cold, somewhere that is above the clouds, somewhere where the sun never set. By Jesus lord, it's heaven!! I was greeted nicely by lots of gods. There were Zeus, Buddha, Ganesha and many more. “ you are the chosen one to save the universe.” Said a mysterious God.

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Ramen noodle (nikkis new nic name)
31/5/2016 11:57:24 am

Bawk bawk bawk bawk BAWK, Ahem i am Mr Bawkinson i will be telling you fellow chickens the story i like to call swap.

Us chickens got treated like… well chickens i guess, and we didn’t appreciate it, ya know cause all that chicken slaughter. So we chickens went on strike from humans, by laying no eggs and sneaking into the food storage and eating all of our expensive food. But the humans got mad, that day we lost many, so many, plot twist not chickens, we lost many meters of land because we stuffed ourselves with food by nightfall the whole grass field was turned into a poo field.

The next morning all of us woke up in a tiny cage at the back of a van, we all were panicking, were where we going?, is this what it feels like before we become teriyaki chicken?, and the question we all thought, ew is this a cage?

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sanini
31/5/2016 12:10:54 pm

“I’ve got zombitus !” ,Megan Murry said sighing,Megan leaned back into the pillows on her bed and told her best friend Rachel,” is it a virus”.

“No”. Rachel replied.” I thought you had the flu some type of zombitus flu or whatever.

“I do it just that … well… why do my knees lock up and why do I moan uncontrollably , do you think that that’s the flu.

“I do not believe you Megan, I am going to search it up” as Rachel headed to the computer. Opening the computer and typing up the zombitus Rachel felt confident. When she pressed enter all of that confidence went down.” HaHa I knew zombitus was real.”Megan bragging about how correct she was.”Fine Megan your right.”

Megan told Rachel.“All kids with the virus have to be quarantined in boarding schools. Apparently, there are Zombie Academy schools popping up all over the world.

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Yo mama
31/5/2016 12:15:04 pm

I woke up heard a big game I ran down stairs I looked out of my window it was a big nuclear explosion I ran like a turtle on a rabbit I couldn't find my familie I ate my breakfast I went to check the basement I found my familie they where hiding to survive the nuclear explosion the next day every thing was gone nothing was here I went to check on my friends they survived about 10 years went past...

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jang
31/5/2016 01:17:44 pm

“We got another of the servants that we ordered, guys.Come and see the family and the other servant all walk to the front door they open the boxes after they taken the servant inside the house they gave him food and clothe they asked the news servant name it was Tim it doesn't stand or mean anything.two of the servant said” the servant have to work for he life if he want to live”said the mum..

He work hard and been treated like a slave. He was hungry and tired he thought of breaking out but he need help he go every servant and ask if they want to be free every servant said yes but the keeper that keep us in the house all the time said the other servant.that servant have been working for a long now they pan in the night time that they going to go out the window one by one they thought that if they break out have got on where to go he keep work for a week every day finding a way out

. that they not going to be find the next night they go out the window at the right time as the keeper go past the frist team go first every one minute the keeper walk around the house all the servant got out they go to the park and they stay the for the night and all decided that they going to fight they high at the park for the day that the all the own go out and be in one place there are to team one team go get the other servant out from the other house they join up and attact the owner but the keeper fight it turn into a war tim got up to the foof and say stop fight we just going to lost one another stop fighting on human treated another like slave they thought about it they thought that tim was right everyone go back to there home and some start a news life tim start a news life the end.

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