Fear and Loathing ...Writers' Craft

17/3/2014

Splash! Pouncing past the floorboards, Snoopy searched for the perfect hiding place. Fearing the dark more, eventually he spots the sofa. The sounds of the bath in the distance, Snoopy curled into a small quivering ball on the sofa. Suppose you wend under the soapy water, losing your ability to paddle and breathe? What if you lost your scent? He was shivering, goose bumps shooting out of him. Were goose bumps on a dog even possible? He push up his paws to his face, shoving the fear away.

10 Comments

Emily

18/3/2014 03:23:17 am

It all began with a dream and a wish.

Yawn whoa this is by fare the weirdest dream I've ever seen. P1of3

Zoe

18/3/2014 03:33:50 am

Beep!!!! She heard the whistle to go outside and start work. It was only 5:30am, what do I do I'm stuck, I'm not ready and the chef is about to walk in it only early and it's a cold and chilli morning

Georgio

18/3/2014 03:35:03 am

Splash!!!!!!! The noise of water running into Snoopy's bath. Scratching paws echoed through the hallway as Snoopy searched for his perfect hiding spot. Sniffing again and again the sofa smelt like the best place to hide himself. The sofa always solves Snoopy's problems. Snoopy curled into a small ball on the sofa and listed to the tap running. Drip, drip, drip, screech.

Alana

19/3/2014 03:08:03 am

I heard the whistle to go outside "what do you mean I have to go outside?" Beanz ran to hide, he tryed to fit under the couch but his big ears wouldn't fit. He saw the shadow coming over him, Big hands grabbed him.....

M&M's

19/3/2014 03:10:24 am

Newsflash! A band of squabbits stole the biggest arcon in the world here is a clip that the FBI found. Wait!!!! the FBI smash thought the office like bulls changing thought gates on a panit.

mat

19/3/2014 03:23:35 am

smack bang ive never got something from over seas i strated to knock on the over sised box there was a little box as well i opened the big box first there was alot of food mum am i aloud to open the small box now yes you may there was a little lizard it looks like a blue tongue lizard.I was in shock at first i love i love thankyou mum it wasnt me look on the note its from your dad i read the note dear jimmy i wont be home for a while but i gave you the lizard to keep you company ill be home soon.I love this lizard ill name you harley mum do you think harleys a good name yes i do think thats a good name honey.I have to go to school now harley see you after school hang on show and tells today mum can i take harley for show and tell today okay yes my teacher wil be so happy.We got in the car and drove to school.We got to school its show and tell time children ms shontele said this is my pet harley it is one of the most strongest lizards in the world my teacher wasnt happy with me i dont know why but im going to find out.harley its not your falt that i got in trouble it might of been my falt i stole something from her.

kodi

19/3/2014 03:23:41 am

Harry trampled inside as his nappy was jiggles around as it suddently smashed to the ground. He kept running inside,BAM!!! Right there in the corner of his eye he see's a 5 layered cake. He runs towards it and grabs a massive piese of cake and shoves it in his gob." NO, NO, Naughty Boy!!" Kristina (harry's mum) growled. "GO TO YOUR ROOM NOW" she showted again.
As Harry ran towarrds his dim dark room that looked like the sky at night with no stars and moon, he rubbed his grubby hands on himself, spreadin white icing and red velvet cake all over his stomache and the walls. When he was in his room he bursted into tears screaming and crying. Kristina knew that he had made a massive mess so she stomped to the bathroom and twisted the knobes as fast as she could.
Naughty boy. Kristina thought because she just knew that she was going to have to make the cake again.

Jake

19/3/2014 03:44:39 am

Gold The Scared Terraria gamer
Time is ticking. Billy grabbed the tired remote and relaxed on the soft couch turning on the hd TV watching Foxtel until a ad came up. Presenting Terraria with a amazing price $17.90 but only had $16.70. Billy was devastated he only needed $1.20 then billy can buy Terraria the game of 2d adventure.

Billy is physical feeling annoyed.

He emotionally tried to push down his feelings but Billy couldn't.

Man he was such a coward

Buzz (Jess)

19/3/2014 03:55:21 am

"Knock, knock, knock" "Yarn" He sat up wondering who was there. Patric always smashes through his firm spickey door, Sandy is on her morning walk in India and everyone else is fast asleep. Spongebob was fearful. How would you like it if someone you don't know came bashing at your door at 6:45 in the morning. Dripping with sweat he hid under his sheets of his coconut. Finally he was brave enough to go answer his front door. Spongebob tip-toed to his door. "Creek" his door went. "How come you didn't open up earlier" It was only his mum.

Cooper

19/3/2014 03:57:26 am

It began with a wish
"Good night baby" as I open my eyes"I don't think I'm in botany anymore"it looks like a new dimension!"not real" she whispered
to her self oh who rude of me I'm muffin

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