First of all mysterious annabelle 2 is gone and say hello to the star!!!!!
yeah hi I don't appreciate how you stole my nickname for this, so yeah, don't do it again. really the star that is the worst nickname ever(in my opinion)
what! no way.
dude you are just rude!
I think the star is a cool nickname
As Max zoomed past everything on his incredibly swift motorcycle it seemed that life seemed to stop after all he finally retired from being in the FBI. Just as he peered down at his little side window and saw a storm trooper!!!!!!!! He shook his head trying to get rid of his hysteria but even when he looked back the trooper was still there. Suddenly, out of the troopers left side pocket was a gun that was being pulled out by it, the storm trooper shot a bullet slightly missing Max. Finally the trooper made his move and pounced onto Max and Max passed out.......
hey stop using my nicknames mysterious Annabelle 1 and now the star. STOP USEING MY NICKNAMES!!
It was really great how you dropped us right into the story straight away. I also liked some of the words you used.
It was Easter and for some reason there was a Santa roaming around saying that it was Christmas. (WHAT?!) After one hour of a random Santa walking the streets a police car is driving looking for criminals and they see Santa. The Santa sees the police car and runs into a building, goes up all the stairs to the roof top and then the police get to the roof when to Santa has nowhere to go. One police man gets out a gun ready to shoot the Santa because the found out that the Santa was a criminal! The criminal gives up trying to run away but the police man is still holding up the gun. the police man says "Any last words?" the Santa says "no." "that's good."
When the police man said "good" he shot the criminal so he could do no more damage.
There was a girl named Mira and ever since she was five she always wanted to learn all about space and what it had to offer,so she chased that dream or hers. When she turned ten she always studied about space,meteors and eclipses. When she was old enough she studied extremely hard to become an astronaut,and soon enough she was a fully qualified astronaut.
Nobody had visited Mars before and she was willing to take the risk of visiting this mysterious planet.A couple of years later she arrived in Mars with her work mates Bob,Frank,Jimmy,Timmy and Fred.
Mira was so happy to be in space.The six of them split up. Mira found a hole with a hint of light in it so she hopped inside like anyone would usually do. She saw a creature, it had a big bill like a pelican,huge ears like an elephant and sharp teeth like a shark.
She was frightened but it didn't seem very harmful.
She pet its head it bit her head and she was eaten into bits.
P.S I know you were expecting a better end but I think this was pretty epic :)
Once there was a girl named Loulou never went to the loo never did a POO and died of old age and constipation to.This time she didn't do a POO nothing like that she did a wee we don't think about those things so instead she neaded a drink so she waited it to rain!!!!
Once there was a guy, his name was Macarron. On earth he was battling monsters. in a sudden hundred or thousand of monster came to attack. "HA!!! take that you ugly monster" And he kill and kill and kill lot of monsters. he knew couldn't kill it all because he was to tired. But he has to try his best because his girlfriend beleive in him and she kissed him before she passed away. when he finish. He knew he had to battle the boss. but in no time the ground begin to shake suddenly he saw a big monster, then Maccaron she a bit hot suddenly he was fling to her. he knew that the montser is going to kiss him "@$$#**#?! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! " suddenly he jump out of he bed then he realize his mouth was wet. then he knew it was his dog. Then he knew he was late for school.
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PLEASE READ IT VERY IMPORTANT READ IT IMIDITLY URGENT!!!!!! IT EPIC!!! XD
Who is this
What does 12345678910 supposed to mean?????
i dont like this story
WHO IS THIS?
Their was this guy who was riding a pink fluffy unicorn on a rainbow and the guys name was called Finn, while he was riding the unicorn on the rainbow he started singing very loud ,pink fluffy unicorn dancing on rainbow and went on and on until at half of the rainbow had disappeared and he had fell to ground but Finn survived but the donkey died and then Finn got hit by a truck and died BAM BAM BAM WHAT.
Boom as quick as a flash police are heading towards LOU LOU and a man but guess what they did,they had a big Juciy,sloppy kiss.When suddenly there's a humongas crash.A lady took her handbag and smacked down to the ground and fainted.Everyone was shocked with suprise iam exited the police came called the ambulance,...came then rushed as a shooting star and the police took the lady too.And the man was left alone in the middle of nowhere so just walking home finds a nother lady HERE WE GO AGAIN
Is a man on the tower and a first man with a dog it might be a first dog and a man having a star war coaster.and a woman in a space and scare of alarms.
During Christmas Santa was very busy he had went to all the places where the presents needs to be send to. But the santa could not let anyone see him and when he said no one he means no one. While he was saying to the audience which is us that he could not let anyone see him a little boy spotted the Santa and quickly video it, the Santa don't want to be embarrassed when he is going to have a meeting with e boss and other important people's so he got a string out of his bag and killed himselfe!!!
When a homesick Stormtrooper stationed on the Death Star misses his motor bike, there's only one thing to do. Watch a LOL cat video on youtube. !!
It was Christmas eve Santa was very busy placing presents under every good girl and boys Christmas tree all over the world.Everything was going as planned when he entered a very strange house .There were cookies and milk at the chimney and a colourful and bright Christmas tree. Santa placed the presents down under the Christmas tree and ate the cookies and milk. Santa climbed back up the chimney . He flew to the next house when suddenly he felt a bit drowsy he was on top of the roof of the 105th house and he started to wobble, tilt and finally fell asleep. A little boy woke up after he heard the big thump and walked up onto the roof. he saw Santa and called for his mother and father. the boys parents called the news people and the Santa was put on the news and in the end the Santa got fired because Santa isn't supposed to be seen.
# Mackenzie is AWESOME
I liked how you slowed down the story when Santa felt drowsy. It added to the drama and I felt like I was there. Remember to keep the story in the same tense, e.g. past tense.
A girl named Charlie who was 8 started to ask herself questions like what is it like on Mars? how does the Sun keep burning? and will it ever run out? So she came to a right conclusion and decided to research space. After that she loved space and studying it. Until on her 25th birthday her parents gave her a once in a life time experience to go out of space (which is pretty AWESOME). She excepted the gift and off she went to a planet called Mackenzie is AWESOME. She explored the mysterious planet and as she was taking photos a strange creature appeared before her eyes. She was astonished. But at that very moment the creature attacked her Dun Dun Duuuunnnn. Charlie became friends with the creature which was strange and took it back to earth but it died because it could not breath the oxygen we breath. "Oh well" cried Charlie I was going to eat it for breakfast anyway.
P.S Mackenzie is AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME BURN!!
Max tried to go faster, and faster. He turned to the right lane, than the left. He realised that the police was not chasing him. He stopped to take a little break, but all of a sudden he heard a noise, it got louder and louder. He looked at the back of him, beside him and infront of him.
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He didn't like the noise, the noise was like a person scratching metal, the noise was stuck in his head . It was too loud and he was starting to slander on the motorbike. The next thing he saw were bars and a plank with a pillow and a blanket. He ran to the bars but something stopped him, he tried to look at it but he could only see a black thick rope attached to him, than he just realised that he was in jail.
JOLEEN OR CRAZY CUPCAKE
Santa had fallen,like an apple falling from the tallest building. Wind all around him, feeling no hope he continues to fall. He try's to call out to his raindeers but he's to far away now. And to think this all happens when his big brother pushed him off his raindeer,all for what, no Christmas.santas big brother had always been jealous of him since they were little.now he had finally got his revenge
As Santa flew through the sky, Santa began to feel drowsy. His grip, loosened and let go of the reins. His body feeling like sand, fell out of the sleigh. Now falling from 10,000ft, Santa was fast asleep. Finally Santa woke up ut was closing near the ground. Santa whose body began to spin, he grabbed the emergency parachute and pulled the cord. Santa now safe from death, went fast asleep and landed on roof of a sky scraper.
As Evan saved everyone from the fire, Evan heard a bark, so Evan ran back inside and rushing to where the bark was coming from. He found a dog, he was leading the dog to the front door. He let the dog out , but a plank of wood fell infront of Evan. He needed to find a way out, he went back up stairs and jumped out the window , he wasen't sure if he would make it. And he did make it. He went to the dog to check if it was injured. The dog was fine.
The santa could not let anyone see him, just then a guy spotted the santa, the time seems to stop. When the guy was about to take a photo the santa quickly jumped of the tower, when all the people saw him everyone thought it was just a human size santa toy. Finally at night timehis wife came to his rescue she brought him back home. Luckily the santas wife was a doctor, she did all the things she need to do. It was no help. Santa was nowhere on world anymore!
The Car Crash
Zooming sixty kilometres an hour a gray Mazda 2 carrying two passengers. On their way home? Nobody knows. Cutting through corners and weaving through every car in sight. At the end of the road lay a roundabout with four intersections. Suddenly a drop of rain trickled down the windscreen. It was raining. The Mazda 2 came across the roundabout. Looking around all directions the car moved forward very slowly,it didn't seem right. A white ute not giving any signals what so ever smashed the front right corner of the Mazda 2. Their bodies jumped from the impact,my vision shuddered and the noise filled the car.
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She Should alien as the alien run to the woman the alien jump to the woman try to run a way but the alien made the woman paso a way.
he ate the cookies and milk and clambered back up the chimney.Santa walked to his sled and climbed into it.He started to fly to the next house, it was a very windy night so it was extremely difficult to get to the next house,he landed and climbed out.santa started to wobble all over the roof.Then he started to tilt and slowly fell asleep
Blinking wondering what to do, should I run or stay still. She was still wondering standing there. With a camera in both hands and a mouth wide open. She tried to warn the others without moving. She took one small step backwards but it moved towards her. Natalie was stumped she new moments like this would come to her. The creature opened its massive mouth and ate Natalie whole. She realised she was in the creature stomach. Dun Dun Duuunnnnnn
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It was a very stormy night. Santa was going with his sleigh and Santa's sleigh was having a problem. Then Santa's sleigh blew up and then Santa collapsed. He flew off the exploded sleigh like a rocket. Santa fell from the sky and he trying to stop himself but he could not fly and then he landed with a terrible thud on top of the roof of the building and when he woke up it was 2000 years over and Santa was very hungry. It was Santa's last breath. Christmas is over forever.
He wobbled, he was weak. on the very edge of the building. if only he deliverd that boys presents many years ago. Millions of children were going to see him fall to his death all beacause some man cant get over a over a christmas with no presents. Santa felt to hands on his back, he shut his eyes knowing he was about to fall. he no longer felt the ground beaneth his feet or the to hands on his back. he wrapped his arms around his body. santas suit felt different he opened his eyes. he was in the clouds in a white fluffy bathrobe. is this... heaven?
The clock was ticking more than an hour had past and there was still no response . I stood up but I sat down again knowing I was forbidden to enter a doctor came out i started to sweat . I could hear every drop, my heart was pounding . I was eager to hear three specific words then the doctor said " he is fine" I could finally rest.
Mr Mac many people have been framing me on the blog for example when I had the name of mysterious annabelle 2 people used that name and now there's 5 mysterious annabelles the star's third quote on this blog was somebody else at that time I was at tutoring please track down this blackmailer!