Responding to this excellently crafted video, 5M creatively write about animals in tests, space and all things in between.
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Kodi
5/9/2014 03:03:06 am
One small step for animals one giant leap for human kind Did you know that before humans went into space, several animals were launched into space, including numerous non-human primates, so that scientists could investigate the biological effects of space travel. The United States launched flights containing primate cargo primarily between 1948-1961 with one flight in 1969 and one in 1985. France launched two monkey-carrying flights in 1967. The Soviet Union and Russia launched monkeys between 1983 and 1996. Most primates were anesthetized before lift-off. Overall thirty-two monkeys flew in the space program; none flew more than once. Numerous back-up monkeys also went through the programs but never flew. Monkeys and apes from several species were used, including rhesus monkeys, cynomolgus monkeys, squirrel monkeys, pig-tailed macaques, and chimpanzees. Now a days human corrages enough to step foot on the moon
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Alan
5/9/2014 03:05:58 am
Landing on earth. Old buildings, Dry ground and nothing else. It had been 63 years since I was last on earth. As I walked it felt weird because I'm have gravity now and the sun's far away but is Mr.Martain still here!
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Kodzs
5/9/2014 03:10:51 am
I like how there were people still alive when he walked on earth
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Mr Mc
5/9/2014 03:08:03 am
The landing had been hard and gruelling, placing even more stress on this aged body. Joints creaking, muscles thinned, Brutus made his way through the concrete jungle. Years in no gravity had withered his body but not his mind. He slumbered forward, walking through cratered playgrounds and empty shells of buildings. Turning through the empty laneways he felt that this could not be his blue planet that he left 65 years ago. What had happened?
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Mat
5/9/2014 03:08:24 am
Imagine being sent into space as a dog monkey and chimpanzee and no not space chimps real life animals what would you be feeling like I would probably feel sad mostly because human kind are just using animals like test dummies but animals are more then just animals their a part of our life
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Mr Mc
5/9/2014 03:12:19 am
I like your analogy (comparison) of animals to test dummies.
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Jess
5/9/2014 03:08:46 am
I look around to see what had happened to my home. I was confused, tired and an emotional wreak. My home was deserted, like an island in the middle of the ocean. I wanted to land home and run back into my beloved owners arms. While I look around I hear a voice, but not just any voice a familer voice. "Chimpy, Chimpy" the voice called. I ran over to where the voice was coming from. I crept forward to see who or what was there.
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Lods
5/9/2014 03:11:36 am
Nice conclusion.
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Kodzs
5/9/2014 03:16:18 am
Sorry spell check Its Kodzs
Cooper
5/9/2014 03:16:17 am
Nice work I like your story
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Maddison
5/9/2014 03:10:09 am
Landing on earth I lookt around it was like a ghost town the houses had old broken walls and roofs no one but me was on earth I was only gone for 62 years how could thay all be gone over that time wear are thay all I mised my oner my family's didn't expect them to all die
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Kodzs
5/9/2014 03:11:56 am
Good effort.
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Jess
5/9/2014 03:13:32 am
I loved the words you used and it made the story sound interesting.
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Robbie
5/9/2014 03:12:00 am
As I lifted of the off the ground I was confused where I was going what am what am I in then it got dark am I dead am I living where am I I ceapt thinking am I dead am I living. Again and again then I see a blue glow is it my home my ship started crashing down to the blue glowing b
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Kane j
5/9/2014 03:13:41 am
When I landed where is everything I'm speechless everything is just gone no people it is so quiet is this a good thing or a bad thing everything is just going through my mind all questions they might have a surprise for me but I doubt it what about if I got to NASA ok I'm going I say hello frank why aren't you answering me there all just standing there I'm scared then in a shock I here frank say hello but it was in my mind I faint
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KYE
5/9/2014 03:15:05 am
As i lifted up into space i was scared I had a little bit of confusion and I was wondering were I was going it sudenly got dark my rocket suddenly started to slow down I scream we were going down i tried to pull the handle up but it broke of it rid to jump out of the rocket but it was to late I hit earth i hopped out of my rocket and looked around everything was on fire I thought that a meteorite hit earth i went into my house to see if anyone was there was no one there I thought were are all the humans
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Kodzs
5/9/2014 03:18:10 am
Wow I like how the handle broke and how earth was on fire
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GRACE
6/9/2014 03:59:05 am
I LOVE IT AND I WOULD LOVE TO SEE MORE
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Marcus
5/9/2014 03:15:32 am
As the spacechimp Greg lands on earth he saw zombies everywhere on the roof of the buildings sourounding him and under the space shuttle and on the around he the spacechimp Greg was old,tired and lazy the zombies jumped off the buildings and they crack the legs they are broken. The other zombies charged at me I try to run but I can't run so quick beacause I am old,tired and lazy they caught me "their eating my brains ahahahahahhahahhahahahhah" who is next to be eaten...
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Zoe
5/9/2014 03:15:56 am
As I landed on the earth. Nothing. Nobody was in sight. Only a speck of dirt was left on the ground. Where had everybody gone and how long had I gone for. Am I on the right planet . I thought this to myself. Let's take this in a positive way. I get earth all to myself. This should be amazing. I started to walk around and what was still around. I thought to myself I've been gone for 65 years no one is going to be here. I looked around the conner of a building and saw ................ Nothing 😱
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Jade
5/9/2014 03:17:47 am
I get out of the space craft.What had happen to the planet there is no trees,no people the place was a mess,wears Dave,he is my oner.He love me,not like the mad science.
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Jai
5/9/2014 03:17:50 am
In 1947 the first animal was sent up into space.Animals were sent into for investigate microgravity. the first monkey named baker rode in a shuttle to Jupiter
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Robbie
5/9/2014 03:18:22 am
Part 2 bang my ship hit the ground there was a corps of my only friend Bruno he is dying stuck under a slab of the roof of my old house it was a 3 story house then dead nooooooo.
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Hayden
5/9/2014 03:20:00 am
As the spacecraft enters the atmosphere. "Touch down" Chip waddled out of the spacecraft and into the cool air...... Earth looked different, very different.
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Riley
5/9/2014 03:20:29 am
"Boosh boosh" the space ship was launched no body inside just a monkey or ape or chimpanzee.27,676 days later the ship said 27,676 days in space.I went to sleep I heared a noise I looked out the window I saw earth I crashed.A army car came passed they said I was gone for 10 years they gave me a paper I wrote I was gone for 27,676 days they said no that's wrong they took me to the last space station in the world every body were suprised that I survived."boom" the space station blows up everybody dies but the already launched Neil Armstrong the space he was the lasted human in the world.
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grace
6/9/2014 03:58:03 am
I LOVE THE DESCRIPTIONS
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