WriteON Competition Teasers

5/8/2016

Ellie

5/8/2016 12:06:00 pm

Pouring rain washed dirt off my face as I wobble my front door, door knob. Work was hard. I normally came home physically tired, but now I was both physically and mentally tired. Learning how to use them new machines made my head hurt. Chopping wood made my whole body hurt.
As soon as I got into my room, well my fraction of the room I passed out. Again I woke up to screaming… And crying. It wasn't my brothers it was mum. I ran into the half kitchen & was shocked by the sight of Bobby, pa’s best mate and mum crowded ‘round the table where pa laid blood oozing from his head. “What happened!!?” I urged.
“He went & got himself too close to a guy chopping wood.” Bobby said watching pa.
Pa’s eyes were still open, he was looking around, moaning. “Bobby,Jack, help me get him to the bedroom.” Mum's voice cracked as she said this trying not to cry.

TheKDestroya (Kamran o_O)

5/8/2016 12:17:47 pm

When everyone got outside, all they could hear was the spooky scurrying of the leaves, the fighter jest dropping more loud bombs, and the wind whistling in their ears.

Nadia

5/8/2016 12:21:35 pm

As I turned back, my eyelids grew heavier by the second and I drifted into a deep sleep.

I looked behind my seat and saw hundreds of unhappy children.

I saw father slowly walk out the door, I screamed at the top of my lugs but I knew that nothing would happen.

"We're here" I whispered.

The blue suited man yelled for me to step forward, as he did, I felt hundreds of beady eyes creep upon me. Slowly I walked forward.

Nadia

5/8/2016 12:24:53 pm

*lungs

Alisagyza

5/8/2016 12:23:21 pm

As we went into the cave, something bothered us. The cave started to wispered something. We tried to be brave and not scared then something felt really weird. We saw something and it's a man singing and we got scared. "Hello" I said, the man still singing and not panicking at all.

howie the panda

5/8/2016 12:27:39 pm

They rushed aldi to find resources but they only found toilet paper rolls so they sneaked to coles they found and more toilet paper rolls so they found a abandon car and used the fuel.

LARRY IMMMASPACEUNICORN

5/8/2016 12:27:49 pm

Blurb
In a supernatural world called Utopia there has been a war between two groups, Dragons and Pheonix, they've been fighting over a.... Pokemon card

PLOY WEERANET SUKANAN

5/8/2016 12:30:57 pm

The story was happened at 1930 in the USA.
The student like to ask themselves why did we have to study.
Jack,John,Edward,Tim,Amy,Alice & Lauren were study at one school in the USA.
Everyday we were study more than playing.

GANES(messigicain)

5/8/2016 12:33:41 pm

suddenIy I heard a sound, FSSSSSSSSSSST! I shivered in fear. My whole body got cold. It was freezing, no, it’s colder than an iced lolie pop. Then I realised that there was a wall of of ice. looked around at the ice wall then my gun to the wall again. My only idea.

Christian THE KING

5/8/2016 12:34:23 pm

The house was old, doors always creaking, wind whooshing through house and spider webs on the corner of the windows.

Archie Gee

17/8/2016 05:46:35 pm

hey sir, At Riverview in my class it was compulsary to do the write-on competition. Here is my story with exactly with 500 words:

Guns are shooting. Grenades are exploding. Gas is spreading. Jenna, Ava, William, Tom, Ethan, Noah, Lucas and Caiden are in their house staying safe with their parents. Their parents are having panic attacks so one of the parents not having a panic attack asks “Kids, I need you to do us a favor, we are all having panic attacks and are too afraid to walk outside. Can we trust you guys to go to the store, quickly and safely?”. “We can do it” They all exclaim. Ethan and Lucas lead the way to the store since they know their navigation through the city.
Without even a mumble, Caiden says “Oh no, I forgot something. I will be back.”. Before Lucas can say anything he runs like the speed of light. So the other 7 wait. 20 Minutes later they were still waiting. “What If He does not know his way back?” asked Jenna. Lucas says that she might be right and they will go back to the house ASAP. They come back home to safety and the ask the parents “Did you see where Caiden went? “No” says Ava’s mum in a worried voice. “We thought he was with you”. Everyone started getting even more worried. “What if he is dead out there, from all the shooting, or maybe the mustard gas has got him”. They looked at the last photo they saw of him and they dropped a tear.

“Caiden. Where are you?”. 000 was called and it was busy. “It may be a matter of months until we can find Caiden. What if he is dead, what if he is kidnapped, what if he is tortured?”. “Trust me, he isn’t. Someone would have found him by now and they would take care of him. Especially during world war two.”

Caiden’s Perspective
“Hey little man, can’t find your parents? Come in my car and I will take you to your house. Your mum told me to find you.”. “Ok I will come with you, thanks for helping.”.
10 Minutes Later
“Why did you pass my house? Can you please let me out?”.
“Too late now…”. “You are staying with us now. For forever torture. And after that, we will sound you out to the army grounds to get killed.”.
5 Weeks later…
“I think that he is ready for the army… After one more thing…”
*Gets Water board
“I’m not going to kill you. I’m just going to hurt you really, really bad.”.
Caiden was so scared that he fainted and during that period of time, they water boarded Caiden. “He is ready.”. They all get on a private military helicopter and go to the army grounds. They send Caiden to the army grounds. The families never saw Caiden again. Some soldiers of the army came to their house and brought the bad news of Caiden being presumed dead. Two weeks later they found his body. In a body bag Inside of a plane going to India.

The End.

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