This week's writers used action, dialogue, onomatopoeia, thoughts or emotions to create sizzling starts.
On the topic of "Boundless Plains to Share"....
The Earth is very big. I keep walking, the panic slowly filling me up. Not just panic, but anger. We have all this space! Why can't we share it!
I can share this plain flat land. No!
Because I want more land!
On the topic "words can hurt"....
I was knocked off my feet by Barry Grey, " Loser!" he shouted. I was knocked off my feet again.
"Ow!" I gasped--words can really hurt.
Oh, ah, stop! Please! What does this sound like? Probably someone getting shot at?
Well, you are wrong. Someone getting punched at? NO--still wrong. Words can hurt!